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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Fist of all, what is a fashion shoot. it is where the product is the center of attention and all attention must be drawn to it. While your photograph is beautiful, it fails to draw complete attention to the article of clothing but the whole scene. By having such a busy scene the eye cannot focus on the dress which it is suppose to. In order to do that the aperture of the lens should have been open to blur and mute the background, drawing the eyes forward.
While this lighting works for a dramatic shot, it fails for a fashion shoot. It is to harsh. Fill lights, or bounced lighting would have lit the dark shadows on her arms and face, giving it a much more appeal. An outdoor fashion shoot is tricky and requires a lot of set up with reflectors and lights. All of those outdoor natural shots are anything but natural.
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